", Lincoln: "Thanks. Lynn: NO! ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We know you are!". Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." "Same here." "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. How can I help you?" She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." DeviantArt Protect. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. It's my first ever one shot I've done. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. "But you know what's not fair?" Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. Dont rage out at us. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! We got your back. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Lincoln: Well, this was cool. YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Ever again. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Lana said, glaring at her parents. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" HATE ME FOREVER!!! ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! Understood?!" ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. And he did not look happy. And can you please unlock my room for me? The worst part is, they had no argument against this. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. "Is that so?" "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! I am bad luck! And you better start talking now!". Someone at front desk please respond." INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." SQUIRRELS WIN! I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Luck. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. This proves it. Not. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" We didn't find any though." The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. Lola finished with. The voice asked. Tell the community what's on your mind. Rita: Sweetie, please! Slow down Lynn! I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. They all shouted. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! I hate pageants! IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. We were given the room." We didn't just barge into the room. NOBODY!!! [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Lola yelled. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. Lori yelled. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" Why are you being arrested?! Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! How can I help you?" But seriously, we made a mess of everything! Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. But right now, no! Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! Lincoln: yeah. They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! (Tears up) Our only bro. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Bad. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! I don't even care about that anymore. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! What kind of family would do this to one of their own? (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! You love baseball. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all. ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. "Good riddance." Lincoln: I said NO! Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. A Happy Ending New Reading List. Lucy: Lincoln, stop! I certainly am not! The important thing is that we learn from them. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln!

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